ASM: “Show, Don’t Tell” Is NOT About Description
The Novice writer begins his story like this:
Ovid lay sprawled across the Bunk. He absently fingered the video remote without ever turning the set on.
"I’m Bored," He said to no one in particular.
The Intermediate writer, learning the phrase "Show, Don’t Tell" writes something like this:
Ovid sprawled over the ancient, brown Geminon wool blanket he had [...]
